I changed my writing style. Here is the details:
- I’ll put space in the beginning of paragraph for narration, and use past tenses from 3rd person’s POV.
- I’ll write the speaker’s inner thoughts / monologue as is.
- I’ll use “_____” between the line for dialogue.
I will use this format from now on. Perhaps it’s a little confusing, but I’m sure you’ll get used to it soon. I hope this will make you understand my translations better.